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Annie H's avatar

So succinct, but it says so much in just a few lines. Utterly relatable. Heartache and longing and the ever present - what if?

You write with strokes of a pen like an artist, creating the scenes. You have an innate ability to put so much expression and imagery into these short glimpses of life, love, expectations and experience. It is truly amazing!

Another contender for your forthcoming book on poetry....

What are you calling it again?

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William R. Boyer's avatar

When Dreaming Electric Blue

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Elena Herrada's avatar

I love this poem.

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M L LIEBLER's avatar

Nice Bill! Very good

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Maureen G's avatar

I believe I like this.

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Jim Brown's avatar

an opening of a once closed door, frees us to imagine the emerald beyond.

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